Hurrycho

In a very distant future, we follow the story of Hurrycho, a teenager exiled with his younger sister to an unknown land inhabited by the Serponi, robots with their own intelligence whose purpose is to eliminate the human race. In order to adapt and survive in these conditions, humans have managed to integrate the Core system, which gives them a limited storage space for abilities and combat or survival equipment. The challenge is that Core energy must be collected from the unknown realm, serving as the primary operating element for both the robots and the new human systems. Moreover, it can also be used as a currency.After being banished into the unknown land without having this system yet integrated, Hurrycho joins a group of pirates who welcome him into their crew. Together, they roam both the unknown realm and the rest of the world, aiming to collect the most powerful weapons and abilities, constantly evolving.Suspense, action, and romance are not missing from our story.This is the first time I am posting something I have written, and having never received feedback before, I ask you to be as honest as possible in your criticism. I await suggestions and opinions.