
by Oak_Winters
Thomas Ludwig just wants to be a good neighbor, keep his suits wrinkle-free, and enjoy a quiet life in the bustling modern city. He values proper etiquette, holds elevator doors, and always remembers his manners. There’s just one small catch: Thomas isn’t human. He is an ancient, void-born horror—a entity of pitch-black shadows, glowing crimson eyes, and a jaw full of razor-sharp teeth—trying his absolute best to live as an impeccably dressed gentleman. Using meticulous body manipulation to hold a handsome human facade, Thomas navigates a world hidden behind the Veil, where magic flows beneath urban streets and normal civilians remain blissfully unaware. But keeping a low profile is hard when your natural instincts compel you to perform relentless "good deeds." When Thomas steps into a rain-slicked alleyway to save two newly Awakened teenagers from a brutal Syndicate hit squad, his human disguise takes a bullet—and melts away. What follows is a bloody display of bone-stretching, shadow-weaving violence delivered with soft-spoken, deadpan politeness. Thomas walks away content with another act of civic duty, completely oblivious to the chaos he’s unleashed. The criminal underworld thinks a nightmare has been born, the government's elite Sanctum Bureau registers a Class-S threat on their radars, and two terrified kids are left wondering if their savior was a guardian angel or an absolute demon. The city is about to learn that doing the right thing isn't always pretty—especially when the Good Samaritan in a suit is an immortal cosmic horror with a dry sense of humor.
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