Wings of Dragon

My first book, any criticism is welcome. I'm dyslexic so please point out any spelling mistakes and I'll fix it. Now to the book. The Tree is our world, we live in it's branches, we sail it's failing sea, and we eat it's fruit. The Empire is our kingdom, we live in peace with it's protection, we trade with it's coin, and we follow it's lord. The 8 Gods are our mission, we live to gain their gifts, we follow their commands, and we pray to be their chosen. A boy with butterfly wings who wants to fight. A godless woman who set sail to understand the Gods. A kingless general who is looking for her wife. An assassin with the face of a child who hates to kill. A man with dragon wings who must protect his brother. They all come together to witness the death of a God.