Cyber Sci Sagas

This is a soft draft of my original science-fiction story, Cyber Sci Sagas. The story is still in development, and I am currently focused on improving the overall structure, format, pacing, and readability. I am looking for honest feedback from readers about how well the story flows from scene to scene and whether the information is easy to follow. My goal is to make sure readers can understand what is happening without becoming confused or overwhelmed, especially since the world and its systems are intentionally revealed gradually throughout the story. Please feel free to point out: Parts that are difficult or confusing to follow Moments where too much information is introduced at once Dialogue that makes it unclear who is speaking or what characters are reacting to Scenes that feel rushed or move too slowly Places where the formatting could improve readability Moments where additional explanation is needed Moments where information should be explained later instead Any parts of the story that break the flow or make you lose track of what is happening This is not yet the final version of the story, so I am open to constructive criticism and suggestions. I am especially interested in feedback that can help me make the story more coherent, natural, and enjoyable for readers while still preserving the mystery and gradual discovery of the world. The goal is for readers to experience the world alongside the characters, learning about its mysteries as the story reveals them rather than receiving all of the background information at once. Any feedback that helps improve the story format, pacing, clarity, flow, and overall reading experience is greatly appreciated.