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The still air

The still air

by S4ygod

ActionAdventureFantasyHigh FantasyMagic

In the land of Nelfir, every child who turns fourteen is brought before the goddess Linda to receive an affinity. Most are given the common gifts—fire, earth, water, or wind. A rare few receive the advanced ones: ice, lightning, metal, or air. Torgo receives air. For months the gift remains silent. Then, on a freezing winter night, raiders burn his village to the ground and slaughter his parents in front of him. In the moment his world ends, the air finally answers. Every flame in Eldhollow dies at once. The raider leader collapses, choking on nothing. Now Torgo stands among the ashes and the few who survived, carrying a power he does not understand and a grief that will not loosen its grip. The remaining villagers look at him with a mixture of hope and fear. Winter is far from over. The raiders may return. And the still air that saved him once is still listening—waiting to be used again, whether he is ready or not.The Still Air is a dark coming-of-age fantasy about loss, the cost of power, and what it means to breathe when everything you loved has been taken away.

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Total Chapters
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#TitleWordsFK GradeDialogueSSPVariation
1The Gift of Linda0----
2The still air0----
3The Weight of a Breath0----
4Rivenbrook0----
5The return0----
6The quiet days
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7The Smoke Moves0----
8The Road Away0----
9The Weight of Warmth0----
10Walls and Whispers0----
11Wooden Steel0----
12The Breaking of Rivenbrook0----
13Three0----
14The Hut0----
15The Road0----
16The Wagon0----
17Millcairn0----
18The Long Road0----
19Greyhaven0----
20Stone and Paper0----
21Auxiliaries0----
22Grey Cloth0----
23Perimeter0----
24After the Trees0----
25The Closing Distance0----
26First Fire0----
27Second Wave0----
28Blood on the Stones0----
29The Last Wave0----
30The Aftermath0----
31The Days After0----
32The Prisoner0----
33The Trace0----
34The Claimed Ground0----
35Return0----
36New Posture0----
37Short Probes0----
38Longer Light0----
39Recoil0----
40Practice0----
41Messenger0----
42South Road0----
43Stoneholt0----
44Answer0----
45Eighteen0----
46The Last Wave0----
47Shell0----
48South Again0----
49Token and Board0----
50Two Weeks0----
51Sponsor0----
52Toward the Coast0----
53Rain Road0----
54Salt Wind0----
55Trial Yard0----
56First Bell0----
57Ranks and Logs0----
58Beast Glades0----
59Under Cloth0----
60Inspection0----
61High Summer—----
62Day Off—----
63Days After Break—----
64Midheat—----
65Red Markers—----
66Crack—----
67Growing—----
68Day Before Leaving—----
69Split—----
70Corridor—----
71Red Barn Line—----
72Treeline—----
73Ash Paths—----
74Under the Palisade—----
75The Mouth—----
76Out of the Mouth—----
77Peak—----
78Thalen—----
79Lines—----
80Downslope—----
81Shared Fire—----