Revision Notice — July 30, 2026
The opening of Immortals Prison has received a substantial revision for prose, scene flow, continuity, dialogue clarity, and the LitRPG progression system. Chapters 1–16 are being updated to match the revised manuscript. The release schedule continues as planned. Thank you for reading while the book takes shape.
Immortals Prison
Science Fantasy • LitRPG • Psionic Progression • Reincarnation • Dystopian Prison World
-- Jeb has lived nine thousand years. For the first time, he can die. --
Hi Everyone! I need reviews, feedback so I can make this a halfway decent manuscript.I'll read yours and give feedback as well! Link your story into your comment!Best!Maverick Santroy
