Fire Unbound

In a world where every person is born with a spark of fire and a unique aspect defined by the color of their eyes, and power defines destiny. And red eyes---rarer than legends---signify unfathomable power. Aiden is born with those eyes, celebrated as a future prodigy.  But Aiden can't even ignite a spark. Every attempt ends in an unstable burst of fire that pops and collapses, earning him ridicule from classmates and doubt from teachers. To the world, he's the only red-eyed failure in history. When a forbidden ability awakens in his closest friend, Aiden begins to uncover a truth far more dangerous than his own weakness. His fire isn't weak. It isn't broken. Its unbound. Tell me if you want more please give me feedback on how I can make the story better. Thank you  enjoy the story