
by Unfunny Jester
(COVER ART MADE BY @hannah.hearts5 on discord. Link: https://www.tiktok.com/@hannah.hearts5?is_from_webapp=1&sender_device=pc) Arata Shinsei dies. He is certain of it. Yet death is not an end—it is only a passage into Cruciatus, a fractured afterlife where souls are processed, judged, and assigned into eternal systems beyond comprehension. Expecting peace or oblivion, Arata instead finds himself in a world of bone-made transport, silent authority, and a bureaucracy of the dead. His arrival is immediately judged by three entities—masks embodying anger, sorrow, and joy—who quickly determine his fate. Based on a lifetime of crime, arrogance, and moral decay, Arata is sentenced without hesitation to the lowest tier of existence: forced labor in the industrial depths of Cruciatus. There, beneath endless heat and iron, he is enslaved among countless other souls, forging weapons from a strange material known as Inanis Silex—a substance that does not merely shape metal, but seems to pierce the mind itself. Whispers emerge from it, twisting perception, dredging up buried insecurities, and eroding identity. Arata’s already unstable sense of self begins to fracture. In the oppressive forge, he meets Keiki, a sharp-tongued fellow worker who quickly becomes his only anchor in the suffocating world of silence and fear. Through her, Arata learns that Cruciatus is not merely a place of punishment—it is a system of disappearance. Workers vanish. Memories fade. And those who ask too many questions never return. As Arata struggles to survive, he witnesses something impossible: a sword forging itself in seconds after he strikes the Inanis Silex. This anomaly draws immediate attention from the overseers, who deliver him directly into the hands of Inanis, a mad scientist-like figure who oversees forbidden experimentation beneath the forge. Inanis is not merely cruel—he is fascinated. He reveals a truth that reshapes Arata’s understanding of existence: every soul carries an Artifact, born from what they treasured most between the ages of ten and twelve. Most never awaken theirs. But Arata has already shown signs of something impossible—something tied to time itself. And Inanis is delighted. Meanwhile, Arata’s mental state deteriorates as the whispers grow stronger, reshaping his memories and self-perception. The forge does not only break bodies—it breaks identity. Even Keiki admits the horrifying truth: people in Cruciatus do not simply die. They are erased piece by piece. When Arata finally confronts Keiki about the disappearances and the system itself, his frustration erupts into confession. Beneath his arrogance and noble upbringing lies something far more fragile: insecurity, exhaustion, and the desperate need to be seen as human rather than a title. But in that moment of vulnerability, something shifts. Keiki finally admits what she has long avoided—that Cruciatus does not only take people physically. It consumes them internally, stripping away identity until only fragments remain. And Arata realizes the truth behind everything he has seen so far: Cruciatus is not a prison. It is a machine designed to unmake the soul. And he may already be breaking.
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