Arrows in The Dark

A world of invisible laws. A magic system built on physics. A legacy that could shift the balance of society. Benjamin Viltur thought he was just a petty thief in the slums. He was wrong. He is a Perstin, a descendant of a lineage once capable of moving cities and defying the laws of nature. Although the Abolition Treaty legitimized their existence decades ago, being a Perstin remains a double-edged sword: a secret that separates those who possess the power of the purple gaze from the rest of the world. Arrows in the Dark is a dark fantasy where magic is not a gift, but a deadly calculation. After discovering the truth about his father’s past and the tragedy that scarred his family, Benjamin embarks on a journey through a kingdom shaped by history and politics. Join Benjamin as he learns the lethal art of vector manipulation under the guidance of an unexpected master, only to discover that in this world, the danger does not come from the law—but from what others are willing to do to control the power of psychoenergy.Author's Note: Hello everyone! I am translating my own work into English and sharing it here to get genuine opinions from the community. I am looking for RAW, REAL, and HONEST feedback on the magic system, pacing, and translation quality. Please don't hold back—let me know what you think in the comments!