by Cristiano Alvarez
I'm going back through Book 1 from Chapter 1 and giving it a proper edit pass. Two things are getting fixed. The first is the prose — tightening, cutting repetition, and clearing out a few habits I'd stopped being able to see.
Follow the story's audience level and its rate of change.
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