Roach(Working title)

Keal grew up in an orphanage with nothing to his name. When the nobles run a tournament using the orphanage kids as entertainment, he sees his shot at proving he's worth something. This is the story of what that does to him.This is an early draft. I'm a first time writer and I'm genuinely looking for honest feedback, good or bad. If you read it please drop a comment telling me what worked, what didn't, and whether you'd keep reading. Brutal honesty is welcome.