Frostwalker

In the beginning there was darkness, the darkness was with the world, and the darkness was the world.  And in such darkness were born gods - beings of great power that wielded sorcery. Driven mad by hunger they created mankind, our only purpose to be eaten as food.  For millennia it was so, until men revolted against their creators using their own power. The first mages were called Dawnbringers, for they were the ones who brought the light to the lands. The dark gods were sealed away, buried beneath sorcery so potent it is thought to be impossible to break.  But all things wear away with time.  Keshal, an archmage and successor of the Dawnbringers, finds himself struggling to keep the dark gods from returning.  And with his failure, the End begins... Hello everyone! This is my first novella ever, and I cannot tell you how incredibly grateful I am that you are willing to check it out. I am only a novice writer, so please feel free to leave any suggestions, criticisms or advice in the comment section. Unfortunately, this story is currently finished and I will no longer change it, but any comments will help me write better in the future, so thank you in advance!