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The Unseeing Mage

The Unseeing Mage

by mike a pennington

AdventureDramaFantasyFemale LeadHigh Fantasy
Shadow rank ~#1073 in Drama↓8

Lisa is fourteen, blind, and out of reasons to keep fighting. Since the accident that killed her parents and stole her sight, her world has shrunk to a cramped room. Music is the one place she's free. So when the music stops, the darkness is always waiting. Pulled through a portal into a world she can't see by a fairy princess looking for a pet, Lisa finds herself stranded in a magical forest with nothing but a cane, a bad attitude, and the stubborn refusal to die in a place this stupid. Liri — tiny, arrogant, and convinced she's doing Lisa a favor — sees a broken human with zero mana and no potential. Lisa sees a delusional child with no concept of personal boundaries. Their first conversation is an argument. Their second nearly kills Lisa. Now bound to a fairy who accidentally shattered her body with magic, carrying power neither of them understands, and blind by a choice she can't yet face — Lisa must survive a world that underestimates her at every turn. She can't see. She can't go home. And the only creature who cares whether she lives or dies is a tiny princess who still calls her "pet." But the darkness that has chased Lisa since the accident that took her sight and her parents, had picked the wrong girl. Because Lisa doesn't break. She plays on. What to expect: A blind MC: Lisa gradually develops mana sight but remains blind as a theme throughout Book One. This may change later, but not yet. A slow-burn tale: Lisa is trying to find herself and her place in the world, while her actions are slowly shaping it. Multi-POV interludes: These brief chapters can be skipped but add depth and push the plot forward. Found family: A lonely fairy princess, a proud noble girl, a spider queen learning to be human, a dragon with a drama addiction, and a rival Lisa does not even know she making. Are a few of the random cast. A magic system tied to belief: Mana grows or weakens based on what you believe. Lisa has infinite potential but lacks the knowledge to wield it. A world that feels lived in: As Lisa explores, she discovers that what she knew about this world was far from the truth. as slowly she goes from only known a cave life, to a growing understand of the world. A shadow self: A voice in Lisa's head that has existed since she lost her sight. Yet when she gained her mana power, the shadow became something more. Is it her unconscious fear given a voice? A side effect of her power? Or her true self? What not to expect: No instant power fantasy: Power comes from struggle, mistakes, and understanding. Lisa is overpowered at the start, but she lacks the knowledge to wield it. No harem: This is a story about self-discovery and found family. No romance in Book One: It may appear in Book Two or later. Warning: Violence and darker themes present. Release Schedule: New chapters posted at least once a week, every Thursday at 7 AM EST. Occasionally twice a week depending on backlog.

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1Ch. 1 The Abyss and the Violin. 6 months ago0----
2Chp. 2 interlude fairy-No Mana, No Problem 6 months ago0----
3Chp. 3 Echoes of the Abyss 6 months ago0----
4Chp. 4 The Song That Couldn’t Call Them 6 months ago0----
5Ch. 5 interlude fairy-Transcendent, then Blind Again 6 months ago
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6Ch. 6 Debt in the Dark 6 months ago0----
7Ch. 7 interlude Nick The Weight of What They Don't See 6 months ago0----
8Ch. 8 "Why Did It Have to Be a Dragon?" 6 months ago0----
9Ch. 9 A Song in the Dark 6 months ago0----
10Ch. 10 Burning Sight 6 months ago0----
11Ch. 11 The Dragon's Scream 6 months ago0----
12Ch. 12 Interlude dragon-The God of Hunters. 6 months ago0----
13Ch. 13 The Staff and the Space 6 months ago0----
14Ch. 14 The Music I Need 6 months ago0----
15Ch. 15 Interlude-nick A Lake of Liquid Gold 5 months ago0----
16Ch. 16 interlude-Mika The Thief of Worthless Rumors 5 months ago0----
17Ch. 17 The Fairy Princess and the Human Song 5 months ago0----
18Ch. 18 interlude-linus Last Dance Among the Snow 5 months ago0----
19Ch. 19 A Pet and Her Princess 5 months ago0----
20Ch. 20 Adventure, Remember? 5 months ago0----
21Ch. 21 All I Have Left 5 months ago0----
22Ch. 22 interlude arane-The Weaver’s Mercy 5 months ago0----
23Ch. 23 Names for a Void 5 months ago0----
24Ch. 24 The Weight of Two Vials 5 months ago0----
25Ch. 25 A Tubby Butt and a Stone Chair 5 months ago0----
26Ch. 26 Why Eat Me Instead 5 months ago0----
27Ch. 27 Eyes of Silk 5 months ago0----
28Ch. 28 The Abyss Wins 5 months ago0----
29Ch. 29 interlude-mika the begining of the King of Thieves 5 months ago0----
30Ch. 30 interlude-Vane Just Business 5 months ago0----
31Ch. 31 interlude-Liri Glimmer in Chains 5 months ago0----
32Ch. 32 interlude-fairy king The Lesson 5 months ago0----
33Ch. 33 Fighting the Darkness 5 months ago0----
34Ch. 34 The Song That Reached Her 5 months ago0----
35Ch. 35 interlude-Clara A Friend in a Cage 5 months ago0----
36Ch. 36 Glimmer No More 5 months ago0----
37Ch. 37 What We Choose to Lose 5 months ago0----
38Ch. 38 Stone Like Water 5 months ago0----
39Ch. 39 If This Doesn’t Kill Me 5 months ago0----
40Ch. 40 interlude-Liri Whatever, Tubby Butt 5 months ago0----
41Ch. 41 interlude-clara The Shadow of Lisa 4 months ago0----
42Ch. 42 A Home Built on Guesswork 4 months ago0----
43Ch. 43 A Slow Walk to War 4 months ago0----
44Ch. 44 interlude-liri The Queen and the Child 4 months ago0----
45Ch. 45 interllude-Clara A Beam Against the Abyss 4 months ago0----
46Ch. 46 New Start as Sisters 4 months ago0----
47Ch. 47 Access Granted, Answers Denied 4 months ago0----
48Ch. 48 The Gambit Only Liri Understands 4 months ago0----
49Ch. 49 Led by the Whims of Others 4 months ago0----
50Ch. 50 Drained and Not in the Mood 4 months ago0----
51Ch. 51 interlude-Rusha Blindness and Brilliance 4 months ago0----
52Ch. 52 Three Days of Patience 4 months ago0----
53Ch. 53 The Day Clara Truly Saw Lisa 3 months ago0----
54Ch. 54 interlude-Mika Money Is Power 3 months ago0----
55Ch. 55 Everyone Keeps Calling Me Void 3 months ago0----
56Ch. 56 The Darkness Plays On. 3 months ago0----
57Ch. 57 The Shadow Was Right 3 months ago0----
58Ch. 58 The Cave, the Bathhouse, and the Spiders 3 months ago0----
59Ch. 59 interlude-Vane Whispers of the Unseeing Mage 3 months ago0----
60Ch. 60 The Prison She Built 3 months ago0----
61Ch. 61 Not So Bad, Goldie 3 months ago0----
62Ch. 62 A Little Push 3 months ago0----
63Ch. 63 A Guide Through the Dark 3 months ago0----
64Ch. 64 A World of Ghosts 2 months ago0----
65Ch. 65 The Weight of a Robe 2 months ago0----
66Ch. 66 Seeing More, Seeing Less 2 months ago0----
67Ch. 67 interlude fairy King Linus–Chasing Shadows 2 months ago0----
68Ch. 68 Wish and Consequence 2 months ago0----
69Ch. 69 Petting the Dragon 2 months ago0----
70Ch. 70 Mud Queen’s Promise 2 months ago0----
71Ch. 72 interlude Clara-Watching the Void Learn to Dance 2 months ago0----
72Ch. 73 Void still learning to move.. 2 months ago0----
73Ch. 74 The Tailor's Gaze 1 month ago0----
74Ch. 75 Inturlude-edward Some Things Cannot Be Taken 1 month ago0----
75Ch. 76 Threads of Trust 1 month ago0----
76Ch.77 Like Moths to a Flame 1 month ago0----
77Ch. 71 Learning to Break 1 month ago0----
78Ch. 78 interlude-Liri The Adventure That Wasn't 1 month ago0----
79Ch. 79 interlude alden The Weight of a Name 1 month ago0----
80Ch.80 The Void's Answer 1 month ago—----
81Ch. 81 Beyond the Familiar 1 month ago—----
82Ch. 82 The Strong Decide 27 days ago—----
83Ch. 83 interlude clara A Song for the Slimes 24 days ago—----
84Ch. 84 Deeper into the Dark 20 days ago—----
85Ch. 85 Where the Ruins Sleep 17 days ago—----
86Ch. 86 Free to Choose, Death Is the Answer 17 days ago—----
87Ch. 87 The Weight of What We Carry 17 days ago—----
88Ch. 88 interlude Arane The price of Mercy. 13 days ago—----
89Ch. 89 interlude Alden In the Void Queen's Shadow 10 days ago—----
90Ch. 90 Lesson, Secrets, and a Growing Void 6 days ago—----
91Ch. 91 Secrets Shared, Secrets Kept 3 days ago—----
92this is not a chapter will delete this monday 1 day ago0----