STAR WARS: The Story of Quin Rivenholt (Working Title)

Me and some friends are playing a star wars DnD game. I have been recapping the sessions from my Character Quin Rivenholt's perspective. Eventually I would like to turn this all into a full story. Please give me your feedback. Quin Rivenholt, a young Mikkian Tinker from Panna 7 has just been thrust into a world of imperial oversight, wild rebellions, and geometric shenanigans. She must join forces with some unlikely allies to achieve her true destiny and find out what happened to her father.