The Cosmic War

The MC, Phoenix, starts his day off like he usually does. Little does he know, he'll soon be involved in something much, much greater than his life before then. Join us on our journey through this modern, yet mystical... Universe? You'll see why I put the "..."  [I have officially run out of ideas for my fiction. I will start writing again when I have fresh ideas. Sorry for The Inconvenience] Please review, give me edit suggestions, and/or comments about how good my fiction is and what I could do better. It would make me extremely happy. Even if you only have critical things to tell me.