Records Of The Paradise Wars

Hello, my name is SBOOS I am a first time writer here, and in general. This is a story I've been cooking up for a little bit, but I haven't fully wrote yet. Feedback is greatly appreciated and any and all critiques are generally welcome. Uploads will be as consistent as I can make it, but I am still in high school, so it will be hard. Please note that you will essentially be reading a fully unedited draft. There will be significant changesSynopsis: Blood. The trail of blood has followed me since I was born, but I don't think it's just me. Our world smells like iron and rust. This record isn't just for me, it's for everyone Traveler, Family or even Ferrymen. Ad astra per aspera. True freedom comes at a cost. Our journey to the stars will be recorded in blood.  And so, I write with pen, blood and heavy heart.