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The Wrong Kind of Immortality

The Wrong Kind of Immortality

by hamisun

DramaActionAdventureFantasyTime LoopProgressionMale LeadStrong LeadDrama
Rising Stars:Drama #49Action #50Fantasy #49Adventure #50All #50

Orestis Stathis became immortal by accident—and spent centuries learning why that was a mistake. This is not a power fantasy. Immortality here is a broken system: a failure state that removes pain, pleasure, and urgency rather than granting dominance. After finally believing he had found a way to die, Orestis instead awakens in his own childhood, years before the curse ever took hold. He wants only to live quietly and end properly. Unfortunately, he understands too much about magic, gods, and broken systems for that to be easy. This story features: - A restrained, observant protagonist who avoids attention - Slow-burn escalation driven by consequences, not ambition - Magic, divinity, and contracts treated like infrastructure - Long-term payoff with minimal hand-holding

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Current Rank
#50
Peak Rank
#4
Followers
928
+686
Story Timeline

Started

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Entered Comedy RS

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#4 Comedy

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Entered Action RS

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#9 Action

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Entered Fantasy RS

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#50 Fantasy

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Entered Adventure RS

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#50 Adventure

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Left Adventure RS

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Left Fantasy RS

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Entered Adventure RS

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OverviewEngagementProseChapters
Comedy #4
Favorites
126
+80
FVR
1.23%
Rating
3.78
Ratings
130
+95
Reviews
20
+17
Comments
N/A
0
RS Days
122

Prose Analysis

Writing style and readability metrics

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Reading Ease
67

Flesch Reading Ease (60-70 ideal)

Chapters Analyzed
10

First 10 chapters sampled

Prose Metrics
Detailed analysis of writing style and patterns
Flesch-Kincaid Grade5.9
Reading level (US grade)Target: 5-7
Dialogue Ratio16.5%
Text in quotation marksTarget: 50-70%
SSP Ratio42.8%
Single-sentence paragraphsTarget: 30-50%
Sentence Variation6.5
Std dev of sentence lengthTarget: >8
Interiority Ratio7.1%
Paragraphs with thought markersTarget: 15-30%
Em-dash Frequency12.41/1k
Per 1000 wordsTarget: <2.5
Lexical Diversity0.402
Type-token ratioTarget: >0.6
Avg Chapter LengthN/A
Words per chapterTarget: 2k-4k