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Hoqalo: The Broken System [LitRPG • Magitech • Hopepunk]

Hoqalo: The Broken System [LitRPG • Magitech • Hopepunk]

by MarekSusicky

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Rising Stars:Romance #50Sci fi #48Mystery #25Action #50All #50

Someone’s been drinking my future like it’s corp-subsidized coffee. I’m about to make them choke on it. I’m Dash. My great-grandfather was one of the Fifteen who saved humanity during the System Apocalypse, founding the corps that rule the solar system. That legacy should’ve been mine. Until my father was disinherited and died, leaving me with nothing but a single building on Earth 2.0. I thought my system compatibility was over 80%. High enough to manifest a system. But they measured me at System Prep School with 17%. Failure, incompatible and the system never came. While my classmates leveled up at System Academy, I got shipped to mining school… fighting bugs for mineral system drops. Then I nearly died, and a broken system manifested. Barely functional, but enough to show the truth: a rival corp has been draining me this whole time. 17% was a lie. It was a theft. The system gave me one thing: Hoqalo, a tinkerer’s trait that lets me forge gear better than anything factory-made. It’s not enough to fight a corp hungry enough to drain a Kallum bloodline, but it’s a start. My corpo grandmother’s resources come with strings attached, but I’ve got my hands, my tools, and friends who will go to corpo hell and back with me. They stole my future. Time to steal it back with interest. Each chapter is ~2,5k–4,5k words! You can support me on Patreon! Currently ~250 pages ahead: https://www.patreon.com/PlotArmorHQ What to expect Cyberpunk LitRPG: Deep system mechanics with a unique twist: A Broken System with glitchy stats and magic!Sci-Fi x Fantasy: A corporate dystopia (Earth 2.0) where ancient magic and futuristic tech collide.Hopepunk: This story isn't grimdark. The worldbuilding is still exploiting people, but the tone is not dark, quite the opposite.The Protagonist: A sarcastic, scrappy underdog heir fighting his way up from the bottom with wit and terrible puns.Corporate Intrigue: A mystery involving the Sol Fortune 15, family legacies, and secret sabotage.Slice-of-Life: Exploring the gritty and glamorous reality of life on Earth 2.0.Slow Burn Romance: Natural chemistry with a twist and relationship building (not the main focus, but present).No Harem. Come talk about Hoqalo on my Discord! Release Schedule 3x a week (Tuesday / Thursday / Saturday)Time: 20:00 CET (2:00 PM EST) + 1 extra on Patreon each week Cover by duyphanltmSome ads designed by Spatuzzi Designs

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